The feeling of two hearts joined in love is the sweetest pleasure there can be.

Life is full of shining moments

but none more tendor

more joyoud

or

more warmly cherished

than the moment

that unites two hearts

in love

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  • h20ho on Jul 19, 2012

    I missed your stuff through out the entire Facebook commenting ordeal.

  • Eiddwen on Jul 19, 2012

    Thanks for sharing this gem.
    Eddy.

  • elee on Jul 20, 2012

    beautyful

  • KittyK on Jul 20, 2012

    Very lovely haiku and I am so happy we can comment on this site rather than through facebook!

  • avissado on Jul 20, 2012

    great share

  • Chris Bailie on Jul 20, 2012

    Wonderful share, thank you.

  • Angelji on Jul 20, 2012

    Oh i love this , a free style haiku..

  • Jswana on Jul 20, 2012

    There just isn’t any miracle more beautiful that real love. I’ve seen how people look when it happens and it’s universal. It is a miracle. Nice share! :)

  • momofplenty on Jul 20, 2012

    Lovely and “heart” felt. :)

  • eaa1118 on Jul 21, 2012

    So…you must be in Love, My Friend:-)
    Thanks:-)

  • drabiakhan on Jul 21, 2012

    lovely share thanks saba!

  • iva75cpb on Jul 21, 2012

    Love is all we need. Two hearts in one, that’s all it takes :)

  • lauralu on Jul 21, 2012

    Beautiful poem
    glad to see you back

  • erwinkennythomas on Jul 21, 2012

    wonderful

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 21, 2012

    Lovely,

  • smokychristine on Jul 22, 2012

    Very special and heartfelt.

  • realityspeaks on Jul 23, 2012

    Beautifully expressed.

  • evcalangian on Jul 23, 2012

    Beautiful poem. Thank you.:-)

  • LCM Linda on Jul 23, 2012

    So true and sweet.

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Jul 23, 2012

    Beautiful…Thanks for the share:)

  • Ixodoi on Jul 23, 2012

    Lovely.

  • Jswana on Jul 24, 2012

    Succinct and pretty. Thanks for sharing! :)

  • lonelyplanet on Jul 24, 2012

    Very lovely haiku and I am so happy we can comment on this site rather than through facebook!

  • Chris Bailie on Jul 30, 2012

    Another visit, thank you for sharing again.

  • lauralu on Jul 31, 2012

    Great !

  • gaby7 on Aug 2, 2012

    Liked this!

  • elee on Aug 2, 2012

    very nice thanks

  • Steven West on Aug 4, 2012

    Very nice sentiment.

  • norlaw on Aug 6, 2012

    Very good

  • girishpuri on Aug 8, 2012

    good one

  • Josephine Stefani on Aug 11, 2012

    So beautiful!

  • mishee on Aug 15, 2012

    nice one :)

  • mishee on Aug 15, 2012

    nice one :)

  • mishee on Aug 15, 2012

    nice one :)

  • mishee on Aug 15, 2012

    Nice one.

  • kslater on Aug 29, 2012

    very nice

  • papaleng on Sep 1, 2012

    a good love Haiku.

  • Hijab khan on Sep 28, 2012

    Very Nice Line……

  • 8Shei8 on Sep 28, 2012

    Romantic Haiku

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