Love poem.

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I love watching the sunset,

as it lights up the sky,

with pretty bright colors.

It is a beautiful sight,

in the early evening,

as we sit here together.

We are alone in our world,

two lovers embracing.

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  • cardy on Sep 21, 2009

    Awww that was stunning lovely poem loved it

  • Marie Milton on Sep 21, 2009

    Beautiful piece of poetry Darla :) keep it coming…

  • Sourav on Sep 21, 2009

    Very beautifully written poem.

  • Goodselfme on Sep 21, 2009

    Nice flow and well composed for total enjoyment.TX

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 21, 2009

    That is a beautiful piece. I could visualise the scene, just perfect.

    Christine

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 21, 2009






    • As the sunset embraces the horizon

    • I see you embrace your lover

    • Not the loved one

    • Its all a mirage

    What is love?

    • But just like the setting sun

    • It shows

    Just as it does vanish

  • Emma Green on Sep 21, 2009

    Great!

  • Tanya Wallace on Sep 21, 2009

    Lovely romantic poem!

  • CA Johnson on Sep 21, 2009

    What a beautiful and romantic poem! I really liked it!

  • STEVE666 on Sep 22, 2009

    Sweet!!!

  • diamondpoet on Sep 23, 2009

    great read. Please view some of my work.

  • emmahaynes on Sep 23, 2009

    Lovely Honey, why must you spam everyone’s work? It’s rude! Plus, could you kindly stop spamming my inbox too?
    That would be great!

    Darla…fantastic as ever. Never stop writing you truly have talent :)

  • CutestPrincess on Oct 12, 2009

    sweet poem… love it!

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