Two of You

LOVELYHONEY on Oct 9, 2009

Two girls and some lover.

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Two of you

Two of you vie for each other

One knows not how

To gather the threads

Where their common lover

Has strewn his emotions

None know

Yet they vie for each other

They don’t bother

For his love as much

As that lover wants

Them both together

What is happening

To this world

Not one for one

But for many together

Don’t bother

Neither of you

Are good enough

For him as ever

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oldster on Oct 10, 2009
Strange little poem Lovely.
Should it be “vied with each other”?
Liked it.
Diverseblogger on Oct 10, 2009
Love your work as always and I am happy to have read this poem. I just love you poetry, I can say I’ve read about 100 poems by you. I have plenty more to go but keep them coming and keep it up
cardy on Oct 10, 2009
You keep me coming back for more, a lovely read and write nice work.
Olivia Van Logum on Oct 10, 2009
Very interesting poem – look foward to reading more of your work!

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