This is a poem based on a dream I had about my partner. He was told by an old Native American woman once that he had two warring dogs inside of him, and that until he learned to control them he would be crazy. My partner assumes it’s because he’s a Gemini, but I think it’s something more then that, and I think that’s what provoked the dream. This is pretty much in raw format, I didn’t do a lot of editing on the poem because I wanted to capture as much of the original dream as possible.

A man is born and he is one.

Within the man dwell two dogs

And they are mad.

Two rabid dogs at war with eachother. 

Each is the opposite of the other.

Though several times they try

To make eachother lay down

The other never is gone.

To fight is insanity

Neither can defeat the other

Because they are equally matched.

The dogs must learn to live together

And they will have peace

And they will be sane

And they will have harmony

And they will know joy.

To fight is insanity

Neither can defeat the other

To do so they destroy themselves

Neither can live without the other.

The man was sent on a journey

To tame the warring dogs

And he faced many a danger.

He encountered many trials

Each dog would have his turn

The man thought surely he would die

With two rabid dogs inside him.

A spirit guide was sent to him

That he could not see

And led him to another path.

Here both dogs agreed and rested

But neither lost their hatred

For the other.

“Don’t look this way or I will kill you,”

“Don’t step this way or I will kill you,”

“It is I who will be in control.”

It only took a little while

Before the war began anew

Though guided by the spirits

The man had not tamed his dogs

In his dreams he hears

“Your journey is not over

The quest which you were sent on is not complete”

But he ignores the whispers

And does not seek the answer

To change his two bad dogs.

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Comments (6)
  • JoeStone on Dec 22, 2010

    great share!

  • pattiann on Jan 28, 2011

    Interesting!

  • Noisy Cricket on Feb 6, 2011

    Warring animal spirits are common among Indians. My Elisi (grandmother) was Indian, that is how I got the name Noisy Cricket. The poem was awesome.

  • rejarol on Feb 9, 2011

    I liked it!

  • thestickman on Mar 6, 2011

    :-) Begs the question, “Who let the dogs out? Who? Who?”

  • adicodrean1967 on Mar 10, 2011

    good post

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