Your eyes like stars…

Twinkling like a star of dust

Spreads through my heart like metal through rust

Enlightened eyes beckons love in my life

The stars of hope brings the end of my strife

You jump-start my heart like electric at disco

You breathe air to my lungs and rip out all gallows

My life just belongs with you

My tears are forgotten like the morning’s dew

My soul, with you, starts anew

With you, there’s nothing I cannot do

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  • carolina on May 13, 2011

    i like the fact that is dedicated to the special someone it’s cute when guys think like that about the special person.

  • carolina on May 13, 2011

    i like the fact that is dedicated to the special someone it\’s cute when guys think like that about the special person.

  • AP on May 16, 2011

    Awwww….This reminds me of my favorite song “I wanna know” by Joe, saying everything a man should say or know when in a relationship. Actually paying attention and saying what’s on your heart instead of hide it, wanting to be tough. i like this poem the best.

  • Marco Polo on Aug 16, 2011

    @AP shut the f up you stupid wanna be

    Romantic dawg! I knew you had it in you!

  • Marco Polo on Aug 16, 2011

    @AP shut the f up you stupid wanna be
    Jandi-Romantic dawg! I knew you had it in you!

  • Marco Polo on Aug 16, 2011

    @AP shut the f up you stupid wanna be..Jandi-Romantic dawg! I knew you had it in you!

  • Marco Polo on Aug 16, 2011

    at AP shut the f up you stupid wanna be..Jandi-Romantic dawg! I knew you had it in you!

  • Marco Polo on Aug 16, 2011

    Romantic dawg! I knew you had it in you!

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