Til I met you.

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Before I never knew what Love was.

I was happy then,

I enjoy being single,

I was strong & nobody got the best of me.

I was a fighter,

That was until I met You…

I lost all my defense,

I am happier & joyful.

And til now 

You make me experience something

I thought I would never know,

ULTIMATE JOY.

Now I don’t want to be like before

strong & happy but TOTALY ALONE.

& I wish You will never leave me.

Damn, that would hurt a lot.

But I guess that is what they call life.

You love, get hurt, stand up and Learn to let go

and move on.

But please don’t ever leave.

Coz i’m not sure if I can bear the pain of seeing you go. =(

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  • AlmaG on Nov 13, 2009

    Now that’s what you call LOVE – The Ultimate Joy :)
    Great Poem!

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 13, 2009

    Awesome! I love the part where you say that you love, get hurt, stand up, learn to let go and move on……good one!

  • Adam Qualmann on Nov 13, 2009

    Very nice. Put into words perfectly.

  • Teves on Nov 13, 2009

    Nice one…

  • drelayaraja on Nov 13, 2009

    Good one. You have a way with the words.

  • Wylrhyss Terrado on Nov 13, 2009

    sweet post…..

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 13, 2009

    So glad things are working out well. A nicely expressed piece.

    Christine

  • deep blue on Nov 13, 2009

    A painful joy to behold. Great post kabayan.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 13, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • Atanacio on Nov 13, 2009

    wow this was really well done two thumbs up

  • diamondpoet on Nov 13, 2009

    Very nice.

  • Carol M Creasey on Nov 13, 2009

    That is lovely, thanks for writing it.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 13, 2009

    VERY HONEST EMOTION.

  • Eunice Tan on Nov 13, 2009

    Sweet and romantic

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 13, 2009

    with the love you afford

    only a fool will think of leaving you

    not me at least

    just say
    lovely

  • Hansika on Nov 14, 2009

    lovely poem…

  • chantell on Nov 15, 2009

    That was Sincere :) Beautiful :) Standing Ovation :)

  • Aiyanna on Nov 15, 2009

    Very sincere words!!! You have expressed something that most of us feel very aptly… :)

  • A. Fool on Nov 18, 2009

    very sweet

  • marisolflamenco on Nov 19, 2009

    Nice and sweet

  • CutestPrincess on Dec 1, 2009

    Awesome poem that carrys with it a very profound message.

  • xtine on Dec 2, 2009

    Very romantic. I enjoyed reading it. Hoping for mor of this :)

  • T. S. GARP on Oct 15, 2010

    Romantic and sweet!

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