A long meaniful poem, Soemthing I truly feel & would love comment on :) Tell your friends :)

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  • Jack of critics on Sep 25, 2009

    Great poem, spelling errors out the wazoo but you somehow managed to make it your own unique style. Great job, this Talon guy sounds like a total prick :( . I can assure you there are still some guys out there with a shred of dignity. Keep up the good work with the poetry, I can see you going places if you can write more like that.

  • Ghassane JAMMAL on Sep 26, 2009

    so beautiful and emotional poem

  • ashley on Apr 23, 2010

    i feel the same pain ur going through …. im going through it right now

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