Can I become a better man by leaving this place and moving my life elsewhere?

Does the smell of the earth
Underneath traffic intersections
Seek a new nativity,
One that is not tainted
By what has already occurred?

Do statues of trees
Remember forest glades?
Can a graffiti sun
Bring warmth to a child?
Can I become a better man
By leaving this place
And moving my life elsewhere?
Or else-when?

Is there such a place
Where thoughts like these take shape
As silently as water fills a puddle,
As eagerly as lovers run home,
As completely as the wind
Fits between the scattered leaves?

If there is –
It is shaped like you.

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  • Michele Cameron Drew on Feb 17, 2009

    Both beautiful and profound! I love it, Reilly. :)

  • QuinMonty86 on Feb 17, 2009

    That really is nice. A longing for simpler things in life and time. Finding them in your love. A great compliment to her.

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 18, 2009

    there’s no such place for a better man… wherever you go, youll always be better if you wanted to…

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