"It doesn’t happen all at once," said the Skin Horse. "You become. It takes a long time. That’s why it doesn’t happen often to people who break easily, or have sharp edges, or who have to be carefully kept. Generally, by the time you are Real, most of your hair has been loved off, and your eyes drop out and you get loose in the joints and very shabby. But these things don’t matter at all, because once you are Real you can’t be ugly, except to people who don’t understand."

THE VELEVETEEN RABBIT

by Marjorie Williams.

is it the poisoned nectar
pouring out like acid rain
etching on your lonely heart
the sweet fluidity of my pain

like a bee collecting pollen
on a drowsy summer day
would you make me honey
and then just fly away

or do you flit across a garden
of a thousand broken hearts
to taste their tear-dust pollen
and yet hold yourself apart

lush swollen petals longing
for the love you’ve dangled there
but so many tempting flowers
fill this garden of despair

no sweet morning glory
nor vibrant hot-house bloom
no exotic centerpiece
or intoxicant perfume

not a gently trailing vine
slowly seeking to entwine
not a rose so perfect formed
to pierce your heart with wicked thorn

but petals softly floating down
to settle gently on the ground
reveal a pulsing more profound
the truth of me at last unbound

not fragile or just ornamental
I’m something real and elemental
the petals from my branches flow
that in their place the peach can grow

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  • Fegger on Jul 21, 2009

    As expected—beautiful!

  • Stephen J. Ardent on Dec 16, 2009

    I kept expecting a metal guitar rip to open up.

  • spiritwalker on Dec 16, 2009

    Absolutely breath-taking.

    I must say that your poetry is one of which i aspire to attain. The \\\’flowering\\\’ captured me, held me there and wound around my soul. My darkness yeilded to the beauty of this peice. I take a bow in your presence…sincerely.

  • lillyrose on Dec 16, 2009

    I was so gripped by this fantastic description of events! This was fantastic!

  • Northernlight on Dec 16, 2009

    Love the lines in the first verse, makes you want to read on, and the theme and flow are good.

  • DriftingInsomnia on Dec 16, 2009

    This was a very captivating piece, nice job on this!

  • Sheila M on Dec 16, 2009

    gorgeous poetry

  • Nicholas Peterson on Dec 18, 2009

    awww. i havent read the velveteen rabbit in forever!

  • miraj on Dec 19, 2009

    This is how poetry should be.

  • Theresa Johnson on Dec 21, 2009

    Beautifully mastered poem.

  • SheBear on Dec 22, 2009

    Beautiful poem and imagery with good rhyme and rhythm. Lovely.

  • maranatha on Dec 30, 2009

    I’m glad I went through the anthology again, for I missed this the first time. It would have been a loss.

    I particularly like the way you open with the quote from ‘The Velveteen Rabbit’. It sets the tone beautifully.

  • A.L.Smith on Jan 2, 2010

    I am speachless. Love it!

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