Uncertainty

HatedNation on Apr 24, 2009

Tags: Lyrics, poems, Poetry, rhyme, songs, Thoughts, Uncertainty

A friendly companion..

What can you do when your times running out?
When you have no choices you begin to doubt.

When all you see seems dark and grey
And the light of hope is so far away

You make a choice and you know its right
The outcome of which is not in sight

When times get tough and all is wrong
It takes all you got to drudge along

And the words you say they dont seem right
to express the feelings you try to fight

When a friendly word can cut like steel
you cant decide how it makes you feel

Trying to swim but the waters are rough
and staying afloat just isnt enough

And all these things keep piling on top
You simply wish that it all would stop

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Phill Senters on Apr 24, 2009
And the light of hope is so far away

This sound so sad.
Tina on Apr 24, 2009
Im so sorry
Darla Cooke on Apr 24, 2009
Very sad and emotional.
STEVE666 on Apr 24, 2009
Well written. Been there many times—not waving, drowning.
Poetic Angel on Apr 24, 2009
I know this feeling,sad but very well put
Daghost413860 on Apr 24, 2009
Well done…the feeling sucks though LOL…been there, rode that…got the cup…nice tho
J.L. Eck on Apr 24, 2009
And you choke down the waters
to avoid suffocation
Then you find a friend
from the HatedNation!
manya on Apr 24, 2009
I can understand the emotions that “uncertainty” brings to someone’s life. You have portrayed those feelings so well. I would stay the best thing in such times is to hang on, stay hopeful and positive.

-manya
kate smedley on Apr 25, 2009
I’ve been there, moving poem.
John McDonnell on Apr 25, 2009
Good job. You portrayed the emotions of uncertainty very well. I feel that way quite a lot.
Lauren Axelrod on Apr 25, 2009
We have all experience this my friend. A wonderful piece
nonetheless
Poetic Enigma on Apr 28, 2009
This is a terrific piece,
Very thought provoking,
and intense
Metal4life on Apr 28, 2009
That’s really deep. I can feel the emotion behind all of it. Very nicely written.
ladybaby on Apr 29, 2009
Beautifully written poem.
Ruby Hawk on Apr 30, 2009
You have a good poem here. Do you notice the best poetry is the saddest? It bubbles up from the well spring of your soul.You have to suffer to get it.
HatedNation on May 2, 2009
Well if that’s true Ruby, I should be able to produce massive amounts!
Sheila M on May 8, 2009
Great poem so full of emotion
lady luck on May 13, 2009
simply amazing once again very well done
Ruby Hawk on May 24, 2009
Your poem speaks for me too. You hit the nail on the head with this one.
lady luck on Jul 24, 2009
love it i can say thats where i am in life now if you could just write the answers to feelin good again that would be great!!

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