Through constant practice the young Iron Smoke Band achieved success and learned to love their art. Now in old age they are still young musicians at heart.

Uncle Joe and the Iron Smoke Band

 

I   have  a son by the name of Uncle  Joe

Whose  loyalty  my family acquired by law;

Needless to say he’s my son-in-law

Whose love for my oldest  daughter  is true.

 

Next year Uncle Joe will be sixty-two-

Meaning, thirty-one multiplied by two;

By  then  my  Mary will be fifty-eight,

But Joe has the option to pause and wait.

 

By profession Uncle Joe is an electrician

But  by   heart and soul he’s a musician;

At  thirty  he formed the Iron Smoke Band

Whose name was famous  in  Cebu  Island.

 

To the Iron Smokers Uncle Joe screams his command:

“Practice!  Practice!  Practice! Of you I demand.

Practice makes perfect, that’s the law of our band.

Practice, boys, or we’ll be forced to disband!”

 

The Iron Smoke Band became popular at the start,

But Time which brought them together  brought them apart;

Where are the boys,  they who  were  young and smart?

They’re oldies now but still young  musicians at heart.  ###

 

 

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  • megamatt09 on Sep 1, 2011

    Very good work.

  • Rosettaartist1 on Sep 1, 2011

    sounds like an interesting character

  • CHIPMUNK on Sep 1, 2011

    brilliantly written

  • burupya on Sep 1, 2011

    I live in cebu but Im not familiar with the Iron smoke band. ( = Nice poem though.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 1, 2011

    That is such a lovely description of Uncle Joe. It is a shame when bands like this come to an end.

  • Dennis N OBrien on Sep 1, 2011

    Smokin’ (uncle) Joe – what instrument does he play?

  • neopisiva on Sep 1, 2011

    Sounds like a good tribute!
    Great work!

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 2, 2011

    Joe plays the guitar and performs at Milano’s with my granddaughter (12 yrs. old) who is a pianist and guitarist.

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 2, 2011

    Burupya: The band was the mainstay at GAO in Cebu but they stopped and travelled when GAO was razed by fire.Maybe you are still a teenager because Joe is already 62.

  • Martin Kloess on Sep 2, 2011

    good poem. but check the rhythm

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 2, 2011

    Romantic poetry is about feeling which runs amuck sometimes. That is its rhythm (movement), different from the handcuffed movement of haiku, tanka, limerick, free verse.

  • Belle Pierdon on Sep 8, 2011

    What a lovely tribute…Very nice.

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 8, 2011

    Thanks everybody. I love my son-in-law because he loves us and with his music he made my family feel the importance of music in our lives.

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 21, 2011

    Thanks Ivy.Joe will be happy about it.

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