Unclean

brittanyjenean on Sep 8, 2009

Tags: pain, Poetry, unclean

You’ll understand when you read.

I will never forget the way I felt when you placed your hands upon my skin
The twisting in my stomach and the feeling of sin
To wake up everyday and take a shower
Feeling helpless and without power
To feel covered in grime and filth and dirt
To know day after day I could have been hurt
To feel the guilt and harbor the pain
To know that nothing will ever be the same
To go day in and day out and know this fiend
And to feel like everyday my body will always be unclean

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Collette Edwards on Sep 8, 2009
sounds like the feeling one has when raped, I hope this is not the case, If so seek counsling it’s the best way to begin to heal.
alc on Sep 9, 2009
A realistic write thanks for sharing this one!
Birgit Niveaux on Sep 9, 2009
great real world pain rape is hard to write about
Marie Milton on Sep 10, 2009
Although a painful topic you have certainly written it in a most visionary way : ) great work!!
Livemike on Sep 21, 2009
Fear not of those fiends deadly deeds
As they sow their own same deadly seeds
When you find yourself in that dark hole
Remember no one can ever touch your soul
Go to that place as it is eternally pure
Ask it for advice when you are not sure
This world is not perfect as you well know
So leave the fiend behind and start to grow
Embrace the damaged child as you are today
Tell her that she is safe and that you have sent him away
Then pick her up and leave that place for good
In a little time both of you will be as you should
God Bless You…
livemike on Sep 21, 2009
I had difficulty trying to send you the above for whatever reason??Just leaving another text so you can read my poems if you wanted…

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