A friendship grew to be larger than just the willow tree.

Special Thanks to my friend, Laura Lango, for inspiring this poem.

I remember the first time I saw your face.
That cool afternoon down by the pond,
under the willow tree.

I saw you coming from the woods,
You walked over my way an’ sat down,
under the willow tree.

You talked to me. I talked to you.
You said to meet me again tomorrow,
under the willow tree.

That night seemed not to pass as I thought of you.
I could not wait until tomorrow to meet,
under the willow tree.

I spent many days with you and felt no shame,
though you were a girl. Everyday I’d play with you,
under the willow tree.

We became best friends as we grew up together.
We sat closer. I held your hand,
under the willow tree.

We carved our names in the heart of our tree.
We danced through the storm. I kissed your lips,
under the willow tree.

We made memories I’ll never forget.
We skipped school to meet each other,
under the willow tree.

We became more passionate as days passed by,
Each day, and hour, I spent with you,
under the willow tree.

But no one could have foreseen
The evening I found you,
under the willow tree.

The blemish on your arm,
the marking of a snake that took a life away,
under the willow tree.

You lay lifeless in my arms.
My tears land unforgivably on your face,
under the Weeping Willow.

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  • cassie on Jul 26, 2008

    Is this poem a true story? Cause’ it made me cry a little:(

  • Big SIS on Jul 26, 2008

    Wow Joe, I always knew you were a romantic emo!!!!!! hahahaha this is somewhat a true story of I think 2 people from CCA? right?
    WONDERFUL poem!

  • Candice on Jul 26, 2008

    wheeee!
    A romantic poem inspired by my sister! This is only midly hilarious. I mean really, who woulda thought? JK!! I’m just kidding. I’m actually not surprised. Willows are Laura’s favorite-ist.

    Speaking of the poem. I thought it was great! Nice story told throughout the whole thing. And I like how the tree developed its own subtle personality. Yay for Joe!

  • amrita on Jul 27, 2008

    hey,i thought your poem was quite good…to me it was reminiscent of the kind of poems wordsworth wrote…gudluck

  • Fipi on Jul 27, 2008

    Wow, I like it a lot! The end was sad but very cool with the Weeping Willow thing.

  • tonisan60 on Jul 29, 2008

    This is a beautiful story, in a very nice poem.

  • beca on Jul 30, 2008

    i think i missed something…please fill me in!!!!!
    nice poem btw

  • cheyenne on Aug 19, 2008

    hey josiah. i really like this, especially the repetition of “under the willow tree”. it made me sad… very well written, with a very beautiful story.

  • ije on Sep 7, 2008

    omigosh.
    i’m so speechless right now. that was sooooo good!!! i love poems alot and this really blew me away!!! its so good! i’m like reading all of them…they’re so addictive!,but this is my favorite of all!!!
    i hope you dont mind me commenting i couldnt help it…

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