Christmas Poem (yes another one)

When I wake up Christmas morning,

and I look underneath the tree.

These are the ways, I ‘d like to feel.

Opening presents, purchased just for me.

Extraordinary opening the first gift.

How sensational this will be.

I will continue with such glee.

Opening present underneath my  tree.

I thought that it was brilliant,

the way you decorated the bow.

So amazing this gift you know?

What a miraculous pick.

Full of delectable goodies.

All lined up in a row.

My Christmas will be spectacular.

Beautiful and luxurious gift for me.

OH! just in case I forget

I like to thank you for your generosity.

My face lights up with delight.

It’s apparent can’t you see.

This will be another great Christmas.

You answered my wishes.

With these beautiful present,

underneath the tree.

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Comments (19)
  • Themax on Nov 19, 2009

    Now I am cheered!
    Thank you ,really cute and wonderful poem!!
    :)

  • CA Johnson on Nov 19, 2009

    I really liked your poem. It reminds me of the way I feel on Christmas morning. :)

  • Billyfnstacy on Nov 19, 2009

    I love it.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 19, 2009

    Great poem about Christmas.

  • Videomark on Nov 19, 2009

    Very nice poem. (I wish I had as many presents as in the picture).

  • Sharif Ishnin on Nov 19, 2009

    Waiting anxiously for presents this Christmas huh?;D Nice.

  • redmail99 on Nov 19, 2009

    I love the chistmas tree, i love gifts, i love your poem

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 20, 2009

    Thanks for getting me into the Christmas spirit!! *:)

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Linda Lori on Nov 20, 2009

    Very nice!

  • Borneon on Nov 20, 2009

    Hehe, now I want my presents too! :-)

  • lillyrose on Nov 20, 2009

    beautifully written! you made me excited for Christmas.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 20, 2009

    Lovely work. you have got me into the Christmas spirit already.

    Christine

  • diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009

    I am glad I could write something to make people happy.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 20, 2009

    Excellent poem!

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 20, 2009

    Wonderful work…

  • Snooky on Nov 20, 2009

    Exceptionally beautiful poem Diamond, but come on now.
    I am still dieting to make room for the Thanksgiving dinner and you done shot me all the way over to Christmas Whoa!

  • Hello World on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice one.

    ***© Hello-World.

  • Hansika on Nov 21, 2009

    wonderful poem….

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 25, 2009

    Aww hunnie, I share the same feelings. I am getting all Christmasy right now..lol. Thanks for this beautiful poem.

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