Underwater Feeling

carissimi on Aug 8, 2010

In the dryness of the dark.

underwater feeling

in the dryness of the dark

the water gently holding me

silencing the nonsense

the world is trying to spray

hear the motions of the water

feel the dance of the waves

do not let the calmness fool you

for this water is holy

with mighty works in play

protecting me always

so i do not have to worry

for even with closed eyes

Christ guides my way

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Comments (8)

PARAM on Aug 8, 2010
Great poem…….

Keep going.
yes me on Aug 8, 2010
OK CHEERS
1hopefulman on Aug 8, 2010
Interesting poem!
rajaryanme on Aug 9, 2010
Very lovely words.
Marie Milton on Aug 9, 2010
Apart from the last line, I think this poem has something special abou it well done
Wordcrafter on Aug 10, 2010
Great poem. Awesome last line! Thanks for your comment
Sharif Ishnin on Aug 10, 2010
Well written poem. Thumbs up.
Goodselfme on Aug 10, 2010
From beginning to end this flows well and you have a great message, especially the end to show the source for the entire prose.Thank you.

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