Explore the sea with your imagination. I included the video of Walt Disney’s Little Mermaid, Under the Sea.

Dedicated to kids at heart and all the children who love underwater creatures .

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A splash was given by the wave
As the mud fish molded a clay
A goldfish dug for treasure to save
And the milk fish buttered the bay
A sting ray raised a question
Which one is better,the bee or me?
The turtle changed its position
It moved its house without a key
A catfish played with danger
Though it does not have nine lives
The dolphin doesn’t have a finger
But it clicked before it dives

If you enjoyed  this one,you might want to check another one which is dedicated to all Trionders,

Cirle of Triond

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  • Annie Hintsala on Feb 24, 2009

    As a mother with a kid who can’t get out of the water, love it.

  • Karen Gross on Feb 24, 2009

    Very cute poem! Well done!

  • Olivia Reason on Feb 24, 2009

    As a little kid, I loved the little mermaid and poetry (jack prelutsky, shel silverstein). Great poem, Dee

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 24, 2009

    Great fun poem and love the song!

  • Morgana on Feb 24, 2009

    Very cute, and I loved the movie. I’ve seen it many times with my nieces. :)

  • M A Bhanpurwala on Feb 24, 2009

    Nice video, and great poem also, thanks

  • rutherfranc on Feb 24, 2009

    cool video.. nursery rhyme material!

  • BC Doan on Feb 24, 2009

    Great one, Dee!

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 24, 2009

    Love the scene you perfectly created. Nice post, Dee.

  • valli on Feb 24, 2009

    Nice.

  • Likha on Feb 24, 2009

    This article reminds me of one pupil who had the morning ritual of pretending she was the Little Mermaid. This is a hit among the very young and the not so very young.

  • Anne McNew on Feb 24, 2009

    Great poem Dee…

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 24, 2009

    that’s a neat poem.

  • AC Hamilton III on Feb 24, 2009

    That was really cute. A very nice play on words, bringing it to life.

    AC

  • trishia on Feb 24, 2009

    “and the milk fish buttered the bay” is one of many expressions that I love. You out did yourself on this one Dee.

    The video to my suprise, is one of our family favorites.

    Thanks for sharing
    Be Blessed

  • papaleng on Feb 24, 2009

    lovely and nice video..

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 25, 2009

    wow, i liked it… cool video

  • Anne Lyken Garner on Feb 25, 2009

    A funny and clever piece.

  • 2tet on Feb 25, 2009

    I love fishes!!! It is a passion as well… hehehe

  • SpencerC on Feb 25, 2009

    Great poem! Nicely written.

  • seashell66 on Feb 25, 2009

    This is so refreshing!

  • Unofre Pili on Feb 27, 2009

    I desire to share to my kids, unfortunately, I don’t have one, neither a wife.

  • Sakuragi on Feb 28, 2009

    Cute poem Dee, it should be posted in kindergarten classrooms…

  • xoxo on Feb 28, 2009

    Cute indeed! Your poem says it all. As an adult I still enjoy “the little mermaid” with my daughter!

  • S A JOHNSON on Mar 1, 2009

    Classic

  • Kimberly Moore on Mar 15, 2009

    My favorite Disney Film!! A playful poem for the sweet children! Wonderful:)

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