Beyond this world.

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He comes to me

In my waking fantasy

A strange being

Extraordinary

Seeping into

My consciousness

Embracing me

Possessing me

His eyes

Mesmerize

His horns

Terrorize

An angel? Or a demon?

A man? Or an alien?

Holding me

Prisoner

My immortal

Lover

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  • Tiki33 on Sep 10, 2011

    Well written. Thanks for taking the time to share this poem.

  • djbtol on Sep 10, 2011

    Hopefully he wasn’t a demon!

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 10, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, this is a very captivating poem, I would like to think this unearthly being is “man”.

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 11, 2011

    Captivating, as usual.

  • Adam Henry Sears on Sep 11, 2011

    Interesting. Please continue! lol

    Good job on choosing a closely guarded format! It enhances the theme well.

    Thanks for sharing, have a nice day.

  • Erin Miller on Sep 11, 2011

    A very sweet and sappy poem. :)

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