Unearthly Beast

Darla Cooke on Jan 15, 2010

Tags: Evil Presence, forest, neighborhood, scary creature, unearthly beast, werewolf

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Scary poem.

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A scary creature is on the loose,

an unearthly beast prowls the forest.

I can hear its loud eerie howls,

echoing all through the trees.

It’s like no animal I’ve heard before,

it brings terror to our neighborhood.

I can sense its evil presence,

as it lurks unseen in the night.

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Comments (23)

ken bultman on Jan 15, 2010
Frightening.
clay hurtubise on Jan 15, 2010
Geez, and I thought I was being quiet!
Good piece.
Thanks,
Clay
albert1jemi on Jan 15, 2010
scary one
Linda Lori on Jan 15, 2010
Eerie!!
xoxo on Jan 15, 2010
Scary beast… Good write.
giftarist on Jan 15, 2010
woow, creepy!
lillyrose on Jan 15, 2010
very scary set up to the poem!
ceegirl on Jan 15, 2010
I am scare
qasimdharamsy on Jan 15, 2010
very well written…SCARY !!!
Anupam Kachroo on Jan 16, 2010
nicee…
leylucs on Jan 16, 2010
nice!
alc on Jan 16, 2010
You got me on that one! I loved it! Thanks for the write!
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 16, 2010
NICE ONE

NEXT PLEASE
Olivia Van Logum on Jan 16, 2010
That is well disturbing! Great poem – scary image!
Milton H Peebles III on Jan 16, 2010
Need someone with a voice like Vincent Price to read this at the campfire some dark moonless night.
Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
devsir on Jan 16, 2010
Very Horrible.

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Steven West on Jan 17, 2010
Keep the beast away from me. Excellent poem.
Francy on Jan 18, 2010
Scary poem but well done.
Keep it up.
standingproud on Jan 18, 2010
I want to hide under the pillow.
nice
STEVE666 on Jan 18, 2010
Maybe that bear’s come back!
thuanynguyen on Jan 18, 2010
That creature is pretty scary, is that a bear or a werewolf? Great poem!
vickymathan on Jan 19, 2010
nice one.. thanks for sharing..
mystery writter on Jan 26, 2010
Wonder what the creature looks like and when will it find my door?
Awesome write and well put together as is the rest that I have read.

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