Unforgettable Sex

T.Rex McGoogle on Dec 2, 2009

Tags: another pinnacle, bit my neck, finding the right buttons, pounding heart, sex, touching lips, two thoroughbreds

There’s nothing wrong with great sex between two
people.

I remember the beginning

How you took my heart

The way your arms would hold me

The touch of lips so soft

The way you bit my neck

To get my full attention

It made our passion wilder

Till love relieved our tension

We’d relax a moment

In lover’s afterglow

Then swiftly you’d come back

And off again we’d go

It never was so easy

Till buttons that you found

You woke up all my senses

And how my heart would pound

Just like two thoroughbreds

We pushed our outer limits

Holding back just barely

To delay the final finish

Milking all the sweetness

As hungry lovers might

To reach another pinnacle

Before the morning light

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Comments (19)

Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 2, 2009
Excellant, very well written and it made me smile.
Goodselfme on Dec 3, 2009
Beautifully expressed.Well done.
mystery writter on Dec 3, 2009
Well written and not a thing wrong with it at all.
Christine Ramsay on Dec 3, 2009
Wow! That is such a passionate and well written piece. Great work.

Christine
jaysonv on Dec 4, 2009
Great poem. Nicely written.
Kitty Starwizard on Dec 4, 2009
It was good there…have you been reading DH Lawrence? Kitty
T.Rex McGoogle on Dec 4, 2009
No Kitty,
I never read Mr Lawrence much. Didn’t he do Lady Chatterly.
I might have read the good parts, I’m not sure. My favorite ones to read were A.E. Housman, Emily Dickinson, Willam Henley,
and Louis Brown, HEY, I KNOW HIM!!!
mkd1788 on Dec 5, 2009
greatly expressed…good one
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 7, 2009
You say two people
I had a lurking doubt
When I read you
You clarified you had
The opposite sex,
That’s not bad

Women are just beautiful
You missed out on so many poems
I wrote on beautiful women.

The world would be a desert
Without beautiful women,
Life would be a mirage
Without hot men

So each must complement the other
That’s what we all should do
Make love to and with those
Who we really love too
Jenny Heart on Dec 9, 2009
Perfectly said!
LoveDoctor on Dec 10, 2009
Excellent!
clay hurtubise on Dec 10, 2009
Steamy! Nice work.
Thanks,
Clay
V rank on Dec 11, 2009
luscious poem…. very intimate…
Lady Sunshine on Dec 11, 2009
Passionate piece. And you’re right, there is nothing wrong with great sex between two people.
LoveDoctor on Dec 13, 2009
This is a great poem. Nice imagery.
speckledlily on Dec 30, 2009
A very well-said and detailed poem on passion and love!

I like it! Thanks for sharing.
Poetic Enigma on Jan 3, 2010
Amazing poem, and so wonderfully said!
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 26, 2010
I REREAD UR SEXY ARTICLE

THAT IS MY PET SUBJECT

AS I ADVISE YOUNG FOLKS

ALSO I HAVE WRITTEN A FEW ARTCLES HERE

TRIOND VETS MY ARTICLES THOUROUGHLY BEFORE IT PUBLISHES IT

ONE IS IN THE PIPE LINE ON

OF SEXUALITY

IF PUBLISHED DO READ IT PL THANKS AND I AM GRATEFUL TO U 4 UR LOVELY COMMENTS AS ALWAYS
LH
Colleen Ranney on Apr 8, 2010
I agree, very steamy whew!

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