Unforgettable Time

Ethics0006 on Aug 25, 2010

Tags: emotions, Fine, lime, passion, past memories, poem, Poetry, sweet memories, time, unforgettable time

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I wrote this poem for my past but still alive memories. I want to shoe my emotions and affection to my friend.

Once upon a time

I was drinking water lime

I thought this wonderful line

One day you would be mine

This time was very fine

A want to see your smile

You have a unique style

I cannot forget that unforgettable time

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Comments (21)

PSingh1990 on Aug 25, 2010
Nicely written….
Priyanka Bhowmick on Aug 25, 2010
sweet
zain0077 on Aug 25, 2010
Lovely poem
Billybobetbo on Aug 25, 2010
Very pretty and lovely poem!
Lord Banks on Aug 25, 2010
A large message in so few words, well done. LB
Kathleen Murphy on Aug 25, 2010
Nice work! We all have hopes, and you expressed that very well.
carissimi on Aug 25, 2010
great share
GodsGrace on Aug 25, 2010
Great Great Great Poem and expressions and emotions as well
WebScribe on Aug 25, 2010
Abraham Lincoln had it engraved inside his wife’s wedding ring: “Love is eternal”. Your poem is a beautiful expression of that truth. Thanks for sharing.
R.Laws on Aug 25, 2010
well-done poem!
giftarist on Aug 25, 2010
Well expressed. Lovely.
Joseph Scott on Aug 25, 2010
Ahh, I know the feeling.. Well expressed!!
Anuradha Ramkumar on Aug 25, 2010
That was sweet and cute.
sandcastle on Aug 26, 2010
Lovely , well written poem!
Kaye TM on Aug 26, 2010
a simple nice piece!
Temjen Imchen on Aug 26, 2010
Lovely poem
LCM Linda on Aug 26, 2010
Sweet poem. Thanks for sharing.
johnpillai on Aug 27, 2010
cool
miss suger on Aug 29, 2010
nice poem,, thank you
gaby7 on Sep 2, 2010
Very nice poem here!
Phoenix Montoya on Sep 2, 2010
Cute poem

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