Hwang and I are one.

The rush of his skin
The warmth of his breath
Our bodies entwined
Holding on,
Clinging to me
Trembling,
Writhing
Moving as one,
Moving in unison

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  • Shirley Shuler on Dec 16, 2008

    What can I say, except to say BEAUTIFUL!!

  • Rathnashikamani on Feb 27, 2011

    Great unity of souls, that lasts for ever in true love.

  • Erin Miller on Jun 5, 2011

    Greatly detailed

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