Unlabeled

Katie Marie on Nov 18, 2009

Tags: freedom, indentity, labels, Life, personality

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Just me.

Loves the old traditions….always trying something new

Sits in contemplation….dances down the street

Strong in her opinions….open to discussion

Conservative….unconventional

Reserved….approachable

Student….teacher

Timid…. fearless

Boring….crazy

Must be….can’t be!

Why not?

Don’t put me in your box!

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Comments (13)

ken bultman on Nov 18, 2009
That is so good. A platitude with attitude.
Darla Cooke on Nov 18, 2009
Great poem!
hfj on Nov 18, 2009
That was much food for thought. Well done Katie.
Kate Smedley on Nov 18, 2009
You are never meant to be put in a box, beautiful piece of work as always.
petercurtis97 on Nov 18, 2009
Good glad to see you reveal yourself
Melody SJAL on Nov 18, 2009
You said it well…very nice.
Pete Macinta on Nov 18, 2009
enjoyed it!
stryka66 on Nov 19, 2009
Haven’t any boxes big enough – LOL
papaleng on Nov 19, 2009
That was splendid, putting your genuine thoughts in such a short poem.
BullwinkleMuse on Nov 19, 2009
I very much relate to your sentiments here, Katie. The moment someone is labeled, their parameters, their potential and their perspectives all are restricted to within the confines of such description. You are indeed all of the above and then some.
cafftee on Nov 21, 2009
I loved the unconventional format, which so cleverly echoes what I think is the essence of your poem.
Svetlana Cherevik on Nov 22, 2009
an interesting and lively poem !
STEVE666 on Nov 23, 2009
Yeah, be yourself! Good write!

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