A superstitious love story.

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Shining star guide me to my desire.
Light the path before me to see.
Warm my heart with your silver fire.
Shining star bring true love to me.
Close my eyes by the wishing well.
For the wish that I would make.
I want true love oh wishing well
For my heart is about to break.
Rabbits foot tightly in my hand
Four leaf clover pressed in a book.
Ive tried every lucky charm.
Yet I still don’t know where to look.
I don’t step on cracks ,or walk under ladders.
I try real hard to be good.
So my luck in love must surely turn.
At least I hope so, Knock on wood…

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  • cafftee on May 23, 2009

    I like it fj. And I’m really not superstitious but if anyone finds a lucky charm for love that works, could you let me know?

  • Mr Ghaz on May 23, 2009

    Wonderful!!..that was nice poem LOV it..Thanx for sharing this great stuff.

  • Christine Ramsay on May 23, 2009

    I hope your luck does change for the better. A good poem.

    Christine

  • Sheila M on May 23, 2009

    Nice piece=)

  • Katie Marie on May 23, 2009

    Fun poem.

  • Juancav on May 24, 2009

    Great poem,i´ll cross my fingers and you ´ll be better.

  • papaleng on May 24, 2009

    a very nice poem, and hope you do better next time.

  • hollynoel001 on May 25, 2009

    very cute poem although i dont think luck really has anything to do with finding love :) )

  • Kate Smedley on May 26, 2009

    Lovely poem FJ, I like the superstition element in the last few lines.

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