Unordinary Love; Unordinary Girl

kulaz on May 27, 2010

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Confusing angle of love. It’s you love her, yet everyone hates her. What’s wrong?Who’s wrong?

They hate; I love

She sings unwell; I had fun, I fell

Mysterious Fate, pray with lucky Cloves.

It something that no one could buy and say. I love you, allow me to tell.

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kulaz on May 27, 2010
happy for my work!
cedngasngu on Jun 19, 2010
love is strange as it is

so is mine :X
LOVELYHONEY on Jun 22, 2010
when a President undresses in front of his spouse

or a taxi driver is in the nude

they all are ordinary men and women

like uuu and mee 2222222222222
kulaz on Jun 23, 2010
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pattiann on Jun 30, 2010
Very great poem.
drelayaraja on Jul 3, 2010
Nice poem.. unordinary..
Akiong on Jul 29, 2010
Nice poem! You chose good words. I like it.

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