Unsatisfied (Haiku)

Angelji on Jan 29, 2012

Tags: Life, longing, perhaps, satisfy

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Not all the things we wanted in this life can be given, it’s a reality and we need to accept it.

Nothing in this life

Can satisfy our longings

Perhaps in the next.

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aheed411 on Jan 29, 2012
Perhaps
Aroosa Gloomy on Jan 29, 2012
and I’m sure I will never get next one:(
sanataryal on Jan 29, 2012
AngelJi, great haiku so far.
avissado on Jan 29, 2012
if all our desires were met…we wouldn’t be alive
Nidhi Rai on Jan 29, 2012
Very nice.
LoveDoctor on Jan 29, 2012
True. Doesn’t that suck
Thell Stars on Jan 29, 2012
nice poem
Vinaya says good bye on Jan 29, 2012
We whirl in the endless cycle of life and death
barney rubble on Jan 29, 2012
The only thing I hope for in the next life is that I dont spend too much time longing for this one ?
barney rubble on Jan 29, 2012
Then I will be satisfied .
erwinkennythomas on Jan 29, 2012
imaginative
ittech on Jan 29, 2012
oh good to know this…:)
AliAhmad on Jan 30, 2012
nice poem….
girishpuri on Jan 30, 2012
great
iva75cpb on Jan 30, 2012
Oh, if there were really a next one…

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