A lot of people will probably not understand it. Because it’s metaphor’s are rather complex. But to sum it up, it’s about a person that was never quite who they acted like they were.. And they’re rather horrible! :D hahaha. HAS NO MEANING NOW, JUST A POEM I FOUND IN MY NOTEBOOK I FELT LIKE POSTING. LOL.

Like the sun, you let me live under you and my eyes burn with tears; I get put under a magnafine glass for your whole world to see and I set on fire; but believe me darling, you don’t hide through the clouds gracefully anymore; your diguise has dissapated and your out in the clear; your like a burning ball of fire in a wide open sky; you just don’t belong, you just don’t belong here..

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  • PARAM on Aug 13, 2010

    Nice one….

    :-)

  • Allison Jae on Sep 24, 2010

    Another great poem. I’m really impressed.

  • addjust on Oct 2, 2010

    great poem

  • Erin Miller on Oct 8, 2010

    Oh it has meaning if you think deeply. You are a great poet!

  • AshleyApathy on Oct 8, 2010

    No it does have meaning, just nott now….it related back then

  • Ubel Ein on Oct 12, 2010

    I like it!

  • Erin Miller on Jun 5, 2011

    Yeah back then for whatever the situation was. Poetry is a good form of release.

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