A poem describing the trials and tribulations of growing up American. The words paint a picture of autonomous seeking through the mind and the body walking and transforming through challenge.


When I venture out into the world,

outside my clandestine abode,

I sense so many places I have

yet to explore.

With average compass-reading skills,

an atlas and a new mate,

I become more thrilled, anxious

to travel on ‘untravelled roads’.

The moon, the clouds, the sun the stars

guides that give direction walk

while those that stumble balk and talk

till lips go frozen and the silence prevails

On these untravelled roads I go

in my mind and under my shoe

to let loose be free and die alone

for it is me that truly set me free.

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  • Jessy {Blue} on Oct 19, 2006

    Great Poem>>for it is me that truly set me free

  • Justin Passing on Nov 1, 2006

    Traveling on ‘untravelled roads’

  • erica hidvegi on Dec 29, 2007

    Yes you know the ones your mind travels but your feet have not stepped onto . . . yet. These are the journeys many only make during sleeping and dreaming, but cannot seem to venture upon during the wakened hours. They miss so much in a mundane simple life based on a continuum of back and forth but not including up, down, or even through. Just back and forth. Boring right, but not strict to adherence.

  • samantha on Feb 10, 2009

    You are giving me inspiration to go where no woman has gone before !

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