Unwritten Love

papaleng on Jun 13, 2011

Tags: Cinderella, fairytale, King Arthur, love, poem, prince charming

Throw down your happy ending fairy tale books, true love is found in the real world.

Unwritten Love

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Whimsies desire for a Cinderella ending
But it’s just a fanciful imagination
A King Arthur’s kiss worth endearing
A naïve girl… giving in without hesitation.

Dreamers believe love is expressed in poetic lines
Well-written – words so tightly knit
But love should show some signs
Promises and vows – to a puzzled heart fits.

Young girls who fancy fairytale love stories are so naïve
Giggling for nothing… falling head-over heels to a Prince Charming that everyone digs
But true love is unwritten, telling your heart to just believe.
Enjoying and treasuring each sensation as you get kiss on the lips.

Girls loves reading tales about “True love”
And foolishly think it suit them.
Yet…only two strangers can share real love,
It’s like keeping your own gem.

True love is unwritten… I guess
It nests in your heart to keep.
And you’ll never experience one… unless
You put down the fairy tale book and never let your heart fall asleep. .

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Rhodora Bande on Jun 13, 2011
Parents will always have this true and unconditional love for their children. Gusto kong ipabasa ito sa anak ko.
Phoenix Montoya on Jun 13, 2011
Sometimes, its nice to dream and giggle a lot for a certain someone yet girls must open their eyes to realities that there is no happily ever after. Good lines kuya, very well composed.
Mark Gordon Brown on Jun 13, 2011
Nice to share your feelings
Poetic Enigma on Jun 13, 2011
wonderful write, I hear what you are saying here. Thanks for sharing
Judy Sheldon on Jun 13, 2011
Beautifully written, but parents do try to protect their young from love until they are ready. We want the world for them and do not want them falling for someone until school and career are in place.
lapasan on Jun 13, 2011
I like the poem. By the way who is the beautiful girl in the picture?
roehill on Jun 13, 2011
Wonderful post on true love.
LCM Linda on Jun 13, 2011
Lovely poem. Good advice on finding true love.
beingwell on Jun 13, 2011
I see you’re a romantic. Nice work!
monica55 on Jun 13, 2011
“True love is found in the real world” indeed, and i can see that you have found it dear papaleng. Thanks for the share.
Monica.
maranatha on Jun 14, 2011
“Only two strangers can share real love
It’s like keeping your own gem.”

Wow, just wow. Lay aside all the crap and meet life with an open heart. This is utterly beautiful – like the lovely lady you photographed. Outstanding! Thank you for sharing this.
crisdiwata on Jun 14, 2011
True love really exists in the real world but it doesn’t entail happiness alone, loving someone truly requires sacrifices and sometimes tears but as Jose Rizal said “joy blossoms from suffering”. A very nice poem.
Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jun 14, 2011
A great poem, so very well expressed! Thank you
kanivel on Jun 14, 2011
Its an enjoyable poem. I liked this line

‘But true love is unwritten, telling your heart to just believe’

I have experienced it, and so I know how true it is…
Lovell Abello on Jun 14, 2011
Beautifully written!…a work of art indeed!
The Soul Explorer on Jun 14, 2011
Great piece of you papaleng! Swerte naman….
TS Orion on Jun 14, 2011
But true love is unwritten, telling your heart to just believe.

This is my favorite line. Nice poem.
Peace Poet on Jun 14, 2011
This is a very powerful love poem. You are quite right that true love is unwritten. Love is a spontaneous and artless emotion.
Ebbin Jose on Jun 14, 2011
There is nothing called true love and false love. Love is always true and Pure. If a feeling that lacks purity in it, or truth in it, then we should name it otherwise.
No Share on Jun 14, 2011
hehehe.. lol. Yoko ng magcomment.=) basta bumabakas lang..=)
Lady Sunshine on Jun 14, 2011
Nice one, papaleng. I met my stranger. lol.
Sebastian Onciu on Jun 14, 2011
Beautiful love poem!
Ruby Hawk on Jun 14, 2011
Well done and true, girls usually are naive and romantic about prince charming.
jrabraham on Jun 14, 2011
wow! papaleng..I really like this poem..I think you are good in poetry
Brenda Nelson on Jun 14, 2011
you are so right, life is what you make it, do not wait for the fairy tale to come to you
mtrguanlao on Jun 14, 2011
Wooooowww! Idol I really love this poem especially the last line! I could say I already found true love now,been there to those fairy tales before,lol!
lian rosa on Jun 15, 2011
“True love is unwritten”—-> This is something to remember.
J M Lennox on Jun 17, 2011
Beautiful poetic wisdom. Wonderful.
pguims on Jun 18, 2011
Sino to paps? pakilala mo naman ako.. ahehehe…
AngelaFaith on Jun 20, 2011
You have written the perfect Love Poem !
FX777222999 on Jun 21, 2011
Feelings beautifully expressed between the lines. Great one!
Palestrya on Jun 21, 2011
Very nice! I like the ending . . . Just found my soul mate recently. . .
Payge on Jun 22, 2011
Fairy tales are nice to read or even watch on television.But a romance in real life has its share of ups and downs that fairy tales do not.But well worth it if the right person is found.Beautifully written and loved it.
megamatt09 on Jun 23, 2011
Well written and insightful.
Melody SJAL on Jun 25, 2011
Nicely written words of wisdom.
fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Jun 28, 2011
Well written, and beautifully expressed.
A girls fairy tale and a young mans; stop when the reality sets in aka a broken heart.
Awesome
bobie on Jun 28, 2011
paps..maitanong ko lang. Anak mo ba yang girl?
Likha on Jul 19, 2011
This is a moving piece paps… written by one who has had a deeply profound experience with love.
Joe Ram on Jul 25, 2011
nice one

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