Changing your perspective can change your perspective.

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Way, way up here in the night
we learn secrets;
what goes on in the treetops
or on the forest floor
if no one is looking to see but the wildings.

Bats dance an aerial gavotte
and fears – both fresh and stale - 
vanish in the dwindled light.
This mountain top we stride
is surrounded by higher ones yet,
and they play as only mountains can
tossing the lightning between them.

Try to grasp a bit of an earthly thing
if you can, hold onto smoke,
chin held up high to touch the smile of the moon
peeking between scattered leaves.
Question what you hear, not the gun’s bellow,
but the heavy footfall on last year’s leaves,
the war growl of the bobcat, too close at hand
or the warming roll of insistent thunder.

Yet another night of rain, moist love from above,
a review of life, as seen by kites in the air,
very few moments manifest as they touch ground,
what a fine way to be.

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  • brian miller on May 24, 2011

    nice…vivid description of the night…having been through the storms this week i appreciate that roar of thunder and the caution in what you hear…hoping that growl is not too close at hand…smiles.

  • Moondustwriter on May 24, 2011

    Love the chin up – to the moon
    what a delightful poem that evokes the imagination to think upward

  • C Rose on May 25, 2011

    I really enjoyed this piece and the prompt image was fantastic. Your closing stanza brings it all home with such a beautiful message.

    “Yet another night of rain, moist love from above,
    a review of life, as seen by kites in the air,
    very few moments manifest as they touch ground,
    what a fine way to be.”

    That in itself could stand. Much enjoyed ~ Rose

  • Monty Wheeler on May 25, 2011

    nice work, christopher. love the prompt image and what your take on it. especially the mountains tossing lightening bolts between them :)

    Monty

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Jul 30, 2011

    Beautiful! =D

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