Up on My Mountain

Noelle Bryant on Feb 22, 2009

Tags: bloom, bold, colors, family, fawn, flowers, forgiveness, fresh, friends, grace, green, Mountain, nature, Poetry, shade, trees, valley

I want to breathe in deeper, to live better, bolder, fresh.

The hills are green
Everything is growing
All around me
I want to breathe in deeper
To live better
Bolder
Fresh
I yearn for excitement
For adventure
I seek out trouble
For encouragement
For laughter
I see the young fawn
Tender and inexperienced
I wish for forgiveness
For grace
I see it all
Up on my mountain
Flowers blooming
Shade trees welcoming
Up on my mountain

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Carolanne Hart on Feb 22, 2009
This is a beautiful poem. I like the natural imagery – it takes me right back to basics and makes me think about the person at my core.
S A JOHNSON on Feb 22, 2009
A very lovely poem.
Jenee on Feb 22, 2009
I enjoyed reading your poem, it flowed beautifully, and kept to the point. Thank you for sharing.
Joni Keith on Feb 22, 2009
This really did have a beautiful flow to it. A beautiful tribute to nature.
Alice Wonder on Feb 25, 2009
I loved this! Finally a poem that very nicely embodies the beauty of the simple, yet miraculous (and miraculously overlooked) things that are a part of the world. Mixed with very bold emotion it’s brilliant and invigorating!
Hazel Crowther on Mar 3, 2009
The poem conjured up a thought of me sitting on a mountain, lovely.

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