When we feel most deserted by the Divinity we crave, that is when we must cry out to Him in earnest.

Upon the Altar

            By David Crerand

 

 

Where does the wind go when it whistles ‘round a corner,

Where does the sun’s spark lie dormant ‘til day break,

Where do all the love songs grow cold and wither,

They’re all shattered on the altar of human heartache.

 

Why must we leave the children crying in the darkness,

Why must we lay our loved one’s in oh so cold ground,

Why must we strip each other’s souls naked,

We are all shattered on the altar of humanity found.

 

Who stares back from the mirror whose glass is broken,

Who staggers down the path filled with embers glowing red,

Who whispers in the hallways of minds so softly twisted,

I stand humbly shattered on the altar of the dead.

 

Who shall I cry out to,

The throne appears quite empty,

Who shall tend the garden,

Now the weeds are all growing free,

Who shall save the offspring

On the ground ‘neath the serpent’s tree.

 

Rise up and curse the malignant retched darkness

Rise up and bask in the white heat of eternal flame

Rise up you children whose hope was near depleted

Clasp hands, become unshattered on the altar of His reign.

 

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  • Theresa Johnson on Jul 30, 2009

    though i may not hold the same beliefs as you, you are an excellent poet

  • Shelly Barclay on Jul 30, 2009

    I agree with Teresa. Very beautiful poem.

  • maranatha on Jul 30, 2009

    Mmmm, this is powerful. You are a fighter.

  • littlemama76 on Jul 30, 2009

    wonderful poem. as usual you have showed your talents are true.

  • clafleur on Jul 30, 2009

    I am still new to poetry, but that was very deep. It seems in your poem you are very aware of hell and the grave.

  • BullwinkleMuse on Jul 30, 2009

    Powerful, powerful phrasing. Great message:

    Who whispers in the hallways of minds so softly twisted,
    I stand humbly shattered on the altar of the dead.

    The last 4 lines are a mighty call to action.

  • shebear on Jul 31, 2009

    A moving, emotive poem.

  • cafftee on Aug 1, 2009

    This is a wonderfully powerful poem. I love the imagery of the humanity and human heartache as an altar – that alone is a thought provoking comparison!

  • Stephen J. Ardent on Aug 7, 2009

    Interesting. Very evocative.

  • XXElleXX on Oct 21, 2009

    I would like to believe that anyone’s struggles are worthy of God’s love and redemption. This piece is personally passionate and confessional :-) The Altar for me is the connection between individuals and Christ..you have weaved the threads of this poem into a rich tapestry depicting humanity’s dependence on God..their struggles to be reconciled to God in Christ..and their struggles to purify themselves of all earthly vanity and affliction.

  • hfj on Apr 5, 2010

    Beautiful poem David. I love the last stanza:
    Rise up and curse the malignant retched darkness
    Rise up and bask in the white heat of the eternal flame
    Rise up you children whose hope was near depleted
    Clasp hands, become unshattered on the alter of his reign.

    I know your specialty is short stories, but you write beautiful poetry. Well done friend.

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