Sometimes I find it hard to justify my technology-dependant lifestyle with my nature-based faith. This is sort of a poetic doodle on the subject.

Tinny toned alarm clock breaks the dawn,

In a sacred circle of table salt

By the trembling light of the television

And mystic chorus of mp3s

She works her modern magic;

Cigarette smoke her incense,

Gas lighters her flame.

Plastic pentagrams in lipstick pink

On wood-pulp processed paper.

Mumbling magic from the laptop screen,

She is the cyber sorceress

New technology for the old gods:

Silicone spell-caster of video voodoo,

Hexadecimal hexes,

Because the wire witch knows

That in artifice ancient wisdom lies.

She is artificial:

Celebrating the natural

With her manufactured body.

With gaudy deformities,

She raises her hands to the ceiling

And praises the sky.

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  • Darla Smith on Apr 28, 2009

    Wow! I really like this poem!

  • Fegger on Apr 28, 2009

    Nice babble, Emma…I was especially taken with,”New technology for the old gods” as well as being the “cyber sorceress”…excellent insight to the detail of your chosen environment.

  • Mys Lyke Meeh on Apr 28, 2009

    a good way to put it into words…

  • rajeev bhargava on Apr 28, 2009

    i really enjoyed reading this poem. just the style of wording and the manner in which the verses are composed. magnificent!!

  • Sarah Elizabeth Hume on Apr 28, 2009

    Candle Magik for the techno age… excellent

  • Bullwinkle Muse on Apr 28, 2009

    Quite the dichotomy, having our senses stimulated alternately between nature and technology and fumbling for balance.
    Love this part:

    Mumbling magic from the laptop screen (I love the rhythm of this line)

    She is the cyber sorceress

    New technology for the old gods (wonderful)

  • Liane Schmidt on Apr 28, 2009

    Interesting work – - it’s amazing how much technology effects every aspect of our lives.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • kate smedley on Apr 29, 2009

    Love the ‘cyber sorceress’ too! Great poem.

  • Aauhein on May 27, 2009

    Awesome!

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