This is a poem that I wrote for a creative writing task. It is based on T.S Eliot’s poetry.
Urban Purgatory
Pens, papers, stamps and ink
The life of a man who had everything
That’s what society says anyway.
But when “everything” is but paper –
Blue, red, yellow, plastic,
Is everything…
nothing?
The Elevator
Nine levels earthward,
To Hell or Heaven?
White circles drift through fog,
like the tortured insane, ensnared,
The silent march into Hell’s Pass.
The roads form a grid,
clawing up, reaching into the sky,
No curves, no personality
Just a ruler and a pen fabricating
Systematic death
Steel, concrete, oil, smoke,
Corpses.
The scuttling feet crawl along the pavement
Walking, seeing, hearing,
A colourful shade of grey
The veins of the heart pulse
Positive, negative
Back and forth, alternating
The leech leeches on the blood
And comes to life
In an explosion of colours and sounds
Ones and zeroes
A façade of life
That cloaks the grim reaper.
Going up
Up on top
He was the leader of all
A king peering through his wall of glass
Through icy air, devoid of life.
He was trapped.
And he wanted freedom.
And this man was one
Who always got he wanted
Sharp shards scatter the sky
Like droplets of water,
hurled towards the sun,
A cold blast of air
Crashed into his gut
The fall
From top to bottom
The cold, hard floor.
The Pearly Gates to Heaven.
Urban Purgatory – A Rationale
This poem is about one of the most prominent themes and issues in T.S Eliot’s poetry – the dehumanizing effects of a modern city and its socially dead inhabitants. This is done by following the observations of a upper-class businessman, one who has climbed to the top of the corporate ladder that has defined success in modern society. In doing this, the poem questions the true value of what society judges as most valuable – money, power and status.
Light is also shed upon the materialistic nature of urban life, as well its central focus on digital forms of entertainment and everyday activity. These ways of life are conveyed as being meaningless and a façade – behind the “colors and sounds,” there are only ones and zeroes, replicated a million times.
In the end, this poem reveals that sometimes the only way to escape “living death” is to die – as the businessman throws himself off the top floor of a skyscraper and falls to his death. Those who realize the truth about human society escape from “Urban Purgatory,” as the title depicts, and go to heaven, whereas those who do not are doomed to continue their meaningless lives for eternity.
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