On the futility of searching in the wrong place…

Searching…

unsure why

inside longing

deep heart cry

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Who am I ?

Whence do I come ?

What’s my purpose ?

Time here – how long ?

~~~~~~~

Elusive answers

impossible to find

when looking in wrong places

groping,  like one blind

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Ignoring truth ‘revealed’

it’s obvious to me

there are really none so blind

as those who will not see.

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  • FX777222999 on Nov 23, 2011

    Great piece my friend!

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 23, 2011

    A beautiful piece. I wonder why we are always seem to be searching for what we haven’t got when we have so much already.

  • megamatt09 on Nov 23, 2011

    Sound points.

  • stryka1966 on Nov 23, 2011

    I think St Augustine\’s words spring to mind, Christine: \”God, you have made us for yourself, and our hearts are restless till they find their rest in you\”…

  • Yvhes P. on Nov 25, 2011

    Great work. I loved reading it =)

  • carmen on Nov 25, 2011

    Awesome as always Alec. I guess it’s human nature to always look for that something more, and as you said the only rest there is, is in the Lord’s hands.

  • Wafa on Nov 25, 2011

    We cannot find answers if we look in the wrong place. It would be a vain search indeed.

  • SUE DEPLEDGE on Nov 25, 2011

    great LITTLE poem with LARGE message!

  • mistymorrning on Nov 25, 2011

    very well done alec…those who search always run the risk of finding less than what they are searching for :)

  • FX777222999 on Nov 26, 2011

    Revisiting this great poem.

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 8, 2011

    I agree, I definitely feel blind sometims because i have no directioj

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