Limerick.

For Valentine he chose his girl
The one that oft made his heart twirl
I love you she said
Then all reason fled
And they took his credit for whirl

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  • koperty3 on Jan 27, 2012

    I really like it :)

  • duck01 on Jan 27, 2012

    Absolutely fabulous.

  • ittech on Jan 27, 2012

    Very well presented.

  • ittech on Jan 27, 2012

    Wonderful piece of writing. This is mind-blowing stuff, my friend.

  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 28, 2012

    This is sweet.

  • observer1 on Jan 29, 2012

    Yes, the tragedy of Valentines . . . but also fun too!

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Jan 29, 2012

    and then both lived forever young cuz love never dies

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