A short valentine’s poem on lost love.

away from you

I will sing my own song

away from you

I will smile

away from you

I will dream

away from you

I will feel love

away from you

I will live

away from you

My life goes on…

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  • drelayaraja on Jan 22, 2010

    Very touching. Lovely write

  • ken bultman on Jan 22, 2010

    Nice poem that seems to take life in stride.

  • ken bultman on Jan 22, 2010

    A nice after-love poem that seems to take life in stride.

  • Guy Hogan on Jan 22, 2010

    Yes, life goes on even after love. Without life there can be no love.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 22, 2010

    beautiful one

  • ChandraK on Jan 22, 2010

    Beautifully written

  • Frances Lawrence on Jan 22, 2010

    A nice poem, it could almoat be made into a song.

  • Midie on Jan 22, 2010

    Wonderfully written…

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 22, 2010

    Nice poem

  • diamondpoet on Jan 22, 2010

    I am aways from him, but he is always here, good write, I feel as though he is here so all those things I can still do, because he leave me so full.

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Jan 22, 2010

    A real show of strength. Good write.

  • Melody SJAL on Jan 23, 2010

    Powerful and nice.

  • giftarist on Jan 23, 2010

    A great move on.

  • historigal on Jan 23, 2010

    thanks for sharing…

  • Anastasia Meredith Oh on Jan 23, 2010

    what a beautiful poem! so touching!

  • magicdarts on Jan 23, 2010

    remembering and respecting a part of you that stays with that person but moving on – like it!

  • Marie Antoinette on Jan 26, 2010

    Sad, but a nice poem. Away can be for good sometimes.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 29, 2010

    Very Lovely….Very Nice….

  • Scorpio2 on May 31, 2010

    I loved this poem because it reminds me about self love, which is very important. It’s not only important to find love with another, but to realize you are worthy of love yourself.

  • ladym33 on Jun 4, 2010

    Nicely done poem.

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