Comments on: Value

By: Momma Tells

Momma Tells — Fri, 11 Sep 2009 05:26:22 +0000

Dear Johanny, I noticed you like Shakespeare, and I can tell that through your sad, despairing writing. It got me thinking for sure. Thankfully, God doesn’t need our “pacts” in real life, and it is certain he values every person, regardless of what they have done.

By: Johanny Lisbeth

Johanny Lisbeth — Thu, 10 Sep 2009 02:58:19 +0000

thank you Tanya

By: Mystify

Mystify — Wed, 09 Sep 2009 21:24:31 +0000

Wonderful work Johanny,sad,heartfelt,touching and very creative! The whole poem kept my eyes drawn making me want to keep reading it word for word,therefore you have purpose girl,you are one hell of a writer/poet!!Your ending was grand!

By: mrinali

mrinali — Wed, 09 Sep 2009 17:06:07 +0000

So I give you my life and just take it please, I want to be the reason; why you still breathe..

The above line of your poem really touch me .. an excellent piece of thinking.