Moments matter, time slips by before you know it.

Don’t have much time for swig,

Really don’t have time for sway.

There’s a place I’m trying to get to,

Which requires my total attention.

You may have the time to waste,

To ponder, sit and silently think.

By the time you get finished,

It’s already nightfall by jiminies,

The entire day has come and

Very, very quickly gone.

 

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  • DaYong on Feb 6, 2011

    great poem!! nice job!

  • tiffi on Feb 6, 2011

    It really flows well!! Great share!

  • ceegirl on Feb 6, 2011

    Time is value but some people use time foolish.

  • browncornelia on Feb 6, 2011

    Love your poems!

  • nimbleful on Feb 6, 2011

    Time is indeed valuable! I really dislike it when a whole day goes by and you don’t realize where it’s gone!

  • Von Shanks on Feb 6, 2011

    This poem says a lot to me…Good job

  • quiet voice on Feb 6, 2011

    Hi there Von Shanks, nimbleful, browncornelia, ceegirl, tiffi and DaYong, thanks very much to all of you for stopping by and comenting. Take good care.

  • solidadah on Feb 6, 2011

    So we should not waste our time. Thanks for sharing.

  • CHIPMUNK on Feb 7, 2011

    great work

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