Vampire

Darla Cooke on Mar 30, 2009

Tags: attacks, Cinquain, evil, Glowing red eyes, prey, Sharp fangs, stalks, undead, vampire

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This is a cinquain, which is a five-line stanza of verse with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, two.

Vampire

Sharp fangs

Evil glowing red eyes

Stalks and attacks its prey at night

Undead

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Comments (8)

rajeev bhargava on Mar 30, 2009
that was really well constructed and brought forward the essence of what is a vampire. i liked it very much.
kate smedley on Mar 30, 2009
Great poem, very well constructed.
STEVE666 on Mar 30, 2009
I’d only just started to understand a haiku. Now a ‘cinquian’. Still, very good. I see you’re reading your vampire book again Darla.
Vince Shocker Knight on Mar 30, 2009
i like it.
Daghost413860 on Mar 30, 2009
I liked it!
Fresh Writing on Mar 30, 2009
Well constructed as usual; not dull in the least.

Excellent description!

-Fresh Writing
HatedNation on Mar 31, 2009
Intriguing use of words.
Milton H Peebles III on Mar 31, 2009
I like it

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