Irresistible beauty.

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She gives me that scowl.

Her face, an ugly mask.

I know she wants more,

and she doesn’t ask.

She is like a leech,

some real sucker.

Draining much from me,

like some low hooker.

She robs me of my soul.

She strips me of money.

Her image, my worst ghoul.

She’s my poisoned honey.

Must get out of reach,

before it’s too late.

Thus, her shadow falls upon.

Entrancing beauty.

An alluring face,

such glorious sight.

Standing by my place,

I wait for her bite.

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  • mamilee24 on Nov 16, 2009

    What can we say, females can be very irresistible sometimes. They can have their way and men wouldn’t know how to say no :)

  • Joe Dorish on Nov 16, 2009

    Some women are simply irresistible.

  • lillyrose on Nov 17, 2009

    loved the way that poem changed about the temptresses looks towards the end. I agree with the others.

  • Juancav on Nov 17, 2009

    From Eve passing to Samson and Delilah ,Cleopatra,same history.lol.Poem with this great description.

  • Mr Ghaz on Nov 17, 2009

    Wow! thats all I can say..this was lovely and wonderful poem..I liked the words..so sweet..Thanks for sharing..cheers 8) 8)

  • deep blue on Nov 18, 2009

    Very well written. Let’s hope Filipinos will say yes to a man again. Nice poem kabayan.

  • Jane Jane on Nov 21, 2009

    creative piece.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 26, 2009

    Very well written..Liked it..

  • Butterfly Musings on Nov 28, 2009

    simply fantastic, I love it!!

  • Billyfnstacy on Dec 7, 2009

    Amazing friend. You captured a truth in words that so many will not come to grips with. I can identify with it being that I have had the experience before. There are ways to resist though. Great job.

  • Billyfnstacy on Dec 7, 2009

    Amazing friend. You captured a truth in words that so many will not come to grips with. I can identify with it being that I have had the experience before. There are ways to resist though. Great job.

  • Geomorphosis on Dec 7, 2009

    No I don’t think so Billy. My woman is irresistible. She has ways to make me do her bidding LOL. Thanks for commenting friends.

    Regards,
    Maxx

  • TwiKnight on May 10, 2010

    Something for me to think about should I decide to have a girlfriend… Good one!!

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