Vampires on The Prowl

Darla Cooke on Nov 18, 2009

Tags: blood, fangs, Haiku, thirsting, vampire

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Haiku.

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Vampire on the prowl

With fangs long, sharp and deadly

Thirsting for our blood

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Comments (20)

lillyrose on Nov 18, 2009
Ooooooo….scary!
Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 18, 2009
Nice.
Rinks Desai on Nov 18, 2009
it is nice…….
Starpisces on Nov 18, 2009
well composed!
Christine Ramsay on Nov 18, 2009
Veeeeeery scary!!!! Well done.

Christine
drelayaraja on Nov 18, 2009
very well written.
K.Reshma on Nov 18, 2009
Nice, bit of scary
Hansika on Nov 18, 2009
scary….oh my god
ashan1614 on Nov 18, 2009
Great write, Darla! I think you managed to wrap up all the terror of vampires in those three lines!
ken bultman on Nov 18, 2009
Good scary 17 syllables.
Westbrook on Nov 18, 2009
Good Haiku…17 syllables. Theme is cool, also.
Themax on Nov 18, 2009
nice and scary,Thank you for sharing
Teves on Nov 18, 2009
Nice one…
IspellBad on Nov 18, 2009
Ok then not one of my favorits you have done. However its was Ok!
Thanks
martinpm on Nov 19, 2009
Good one!
Dark Antirex on Nov 19, 2009
I’d better eat a garlic for tonight XD XD
xoxo on Nov 19, 2009
Very nice and creepy… Well done on this Darla.
writergirl77 on Nov 19, 2009
creepy!! I liked it
STEVE666 on Nov 23, 2009
Good haiku, Darla.
PhoenixRox on Nov 25, 2009
I am fascinated by Vampires and wear-wolves and your haikus on both are great!

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