Here are another two of the “tasty” vote messages I’ve left for clan members in the Vampire Wars game on Facebook. As usual, they lean towards the decidedly suggestive!

Here are another two of the “tasty” vote messages I’ve left for clan members in the Vampire Wars game on Facebook. As usual, they lean towards the decidedly suggestive!

For those who don’t know the format, within the game you can vote other players tasty, tempting or toxic and you can leave a message alongside the vote, though you’re limited to about five lines of text. Many players use that to post a tiny vampiric vignette, either bloody or sensual or both.

For the previous “nibbles” I’ve published, see:

http://authspot.com/short-stories/two-vampiric-short-nibbles/

http://authspot.com/poetry/two-more-vampiric-nibbles/

Tasty #5

Fangs clash, talons twine

Lips lock in kiss divine

Tongues tangle, teeth bite

Blood staining skin so white

Smell of need, smell of gore

Drives us onwards, needing more

Falling in a tangled heap

At least we vampires need no sleep!

(+2)

 

Tasty #6

Lazily, I watch the crimson dribble run down over your neck and breasts, belly and thighs. I follow its progress with my tongue and you whimper, tugging against the manacles and chains that mere moments before you begged me to place you in. Tasty! (+2)

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Comments (6)
  • Allison Jae on Jan 30, 2011

    You know I love vampires. Cool post, Bruce. I just need to go back and read the other ones.

  • samgoldencoffee on Jan 31, 2011

    vampires,… are they real???
    interesting post.

  • Bruce Officer on Jan 31, 2011

    Of course vampires are real! The fairies living at the bottom of my garden told me so!!

  • Lord Banks on Jan 31, 2011

    Although this subject is not really my thing. I can spot good work and your work is always well presemted and very well punctuated and spelt. Good stuff my friend. LB

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 31, 2011

    I love vampires!

  • karen on Jan 31, 2011

    I agree with Lord Banks…about your work being good and always well presented :)

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