Here I submit my response to another of Raman13’s poems that I like. I attempt to express a similar sentiment in my own words.

This is a poem that expresses some of the important things (perhaps inspired by a happy child):
Beautiful Life,
Forgoing strife,
Reciprocal miles,
Eye-twinkling style.
Awakening voice,
Wonderful time,
Experience choice,
Encompassing smile.
All is fine,
A peaceful while…

Below is raman13’s original statement (without the photo that he included):
This is a poem that describe some main aspects of human life.
Beautiful Life,
Difficult type,
Challenging thrice,
Amazing style,
Hard to choice,
Wonderful line,
Experience time,
Attractive smile,
All is fine.

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