Love lost.

Twisted times are here again, this one is for you my friend

The night is cold and longer than ever 

My mission has failed to see you for better

All I see are the darkest things, my mind is filled with agony.

I wonder why you lied to me, forever it’s a mystery

It sounded good at the time, I needed support and you by my side

Now when I look back I can see, you were never looking out for me.

You were only out to help yourself, another night under the belt

You make a trip and then your out, makes you want to scream and shout.

Now the days are flying by but you missed it all cause you were high.

No longer days it’s turned into months, still you can’t control yourself

I should have known, they always lie I’ll never trust another guy

You cannot break me anymore I already dealt with this crap before

This time is different from before, the feelings meant a whole lot more

That’s why I have to be done with you I’m tired of wondering what to do

I’m sick of being sad and blue, and feeling all shitty because of you.

Now a year has passed us by, you said you’d quit but your still getting high

So now it happens like I said before, pack your shit and head for the door.

Please don’t call me anymore, with me you don’t get a chance number four.

I gave you three…chances and a family, but that just wasn’t good enough for you

On top of your addictions and lying you cheated on me too,

Man that stuff’s really got a hold of you, so here’s what I think you should do

Don’t change now, just go get high and watch the rest of your life pass you by.

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  • Will Dee on Jun 8, 2009

    WOW! A powerful message.

  • hfj on Jun 9, 2009

    Best to forget after three chances. He has a problem, and you’re not the solution. But you’ve already figured this out and have taken the proper steps, and will rebound nicely. Powerful piece.

  • Cory M. on Jun 9, 2009

    I love the way you write.

  • Atanacio on Jun 15, 2009

    you’re right, thumbs up very good message Frank :)

  • Sky Lumina on Jun 17, 2009

    thx for the recommendation, u nailed it! i hope that if this poem wasn’t fictional, u’re better now! :)

  • samy on Jun 18, 2009

    nice was good, relationships suck sometimes, makes for good writing though

  • JessykaRabbit on Jun 21, 2009

    You really got the point across there. I liked it! :0)

  • BradONeill on Jun 24, 2009

    very good I loved the pacing it seemed to get madder and madder. great emotion great form. Im with all the other posters stick to your guns and let the bastard go!

  • Peter Cimino on Aug 17, 2009

    Wow… very powerful and full of raw emotion. Awesome piece!!

  • Michael Degenhardt on Aug 25, 2009

    While no one should be treated by anyone like this, I applaud the strength you musterred as you did the right thing by ejecting him. Excellent, you put the cards on the table and did what you had to do. You’ll find and get better. Michael

  • tim windisch on Sep 1, 2009

    Really stark; Doesn’t beat around the bush, hammers home your truest, most sad feelings. I hope you’ve experienced some joy since this piece. It’s the first of yours I’ve read. I don’t believe I’ve posted anything quite that heart tugging, maybe close, but that one really hits hard! Love it; I’ll be reading more.

  • Starpisces on Sep 11, 2009

    Sounds really angry and straight to the point… well written. Like it.

  • livemike on Sep 12, 2009

    I really enjoyed that..great story and well written…

  • Kaavs on Sep 13, 2009

    I Liked it!

    Cheers,
    Kaavs

  • Brandon Huffey on Sep 17, 2009

    Well Vented.

    B.

  • Netty net on Sep 19, 2009

    Will it sounds to me too people both want some different, Like you don’t see eye to eye.

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