Venus

Milton H Peebles III on Jan 2, 2009

Tags: Beauty, honor, Hope, love

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One of those poem I wrote when I was a preteen.

To my one.
That has helped many share.
My mate you have given me.
Your beauty I shall not have to see.

You great one.
Goddess of mans greatest wealth.
I praise you ever so.
Never let mine go.

The only one.
Thy power can change my world.
Let love grow strong.
Venus I hone thee long.

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Comments (7)

Christine Ramsay on Jan 2, 2009
Gosh! A very high standard for a preteen.

Christine
Morgana on Jan 2, 2009
How beautiful. It sounds you dedicated to a special girl, more guys should do that.
Darla Smith on Jan 2, 2009
This is a great poem!
lisa on Jan 2, 2009
beautiful!! Were you always so serious as a teenager?
Milton H Peebles III on Jan 26, 2009
That last line is supposed to say “Venus I honor thee long”
PR Mace on Aug 22, 2009
Not bad for a teen. I agree you where a bit serious. Another well written body of work.
Palestrya on Mar 20, 2011
Some of us were precocious and very serious about life, I was one of those. Nice poem, thank you for writing.

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