My friend’s comments …
Very Good Poem
Very good poem
My friend says
Her nice comments
In my heart plays
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Smile in her words
To me encourage
She shines like moon
For me in space
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Her starry emotions
Twinkle at night
Realistic and attractive
Looks their light
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With her brilliance
My mind brights
I smile in the day
With my sunlight
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Sun and moon like
We are best friends
Life is our talk,Love is its essence
Thanks my dear, for your Hindi comments
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