My friend’s comments …

                           Very Good Poem

Very good poem

My friend says

Her nice comments

In my heart plays

***

Smile in her words

To me encourage

She shines like moon

For me in space

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Her starry emotions

Twinkle at night

Realistic and attractive

Looks their light

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With her brilliance

My mind brights

I smile in the day

With my sunlight

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Sun and moon like

We are best friends

Life is our talk,Love is its essence

Thanks my dear, for your Hindi comments

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  • sanataryal on Apr 28, 2011

    Beautiful poetry.Nicely written.

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