Very Special

Jackie Stroud Painter on Oct 17, 2008

Tags: friend, Life, love

Finding someone who is very special.

Sitting there
Seeing you across the room
You smile my way
That’s all it takes
And I know
You are something
Very special
You capture
My heart
Fill it with passion
Giving life a new look
Because you have
A way about you
But there’s so much more
The tears flow instantly
There’s something
About you
And my heart only knows
Just from seeing you
Across the room

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C A Johnson on Oct 17, 2008
This was a very beautiful poem, Jackie. I really loved it.
Will Gray on Oct 17, 2008
Excellent poem. I like it a lot!
Liane Schmidt on Oct 17, 2008
So nice – keep up the good work!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
goodselfme on Oct 17, 2008
Very easy flow with your pen on this one. Words danced across the page for me. WEll done!
Lavia on Oct 17, 2008
Yes!! When you see someone for the first time. I remember those range of emotions. Too bad for most they don’t last for the entire relationship. This was an excellent poem. Brought me back to what use to be.
Jamie Marie Hall on Oct 18, 2008
I like it, “love at first sight”, great images.
Friend on Oct 19, 2008
Very cute!
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Oct 19, 2008
Short, but it speaks volumes…nice work.
josh utley on Oct 20, 2008
i liked this one…i try to say the same thing everyday to my other half.
gabbic1219 on Oct 21, 2008
sweet and romantic,love and feeling those vibes are amazing!good piece!
RJ Chamberlain on Oct 25, 2008
Beautiful Jackie. Well done
Bernadette Louise on Nov 1, 2008
Well done, if only the novelty never fades after time!
Glynis Smy on Nov 6, 2008
I still get that feeling after 30+yrs since DH and I met, we met across a room. Nice work.
DVL on Nov 14, 2008
Nice Sound
Jackie Stroud Painter on Nov 15, 2008
Thank you to everyone for their nice words. The kind words are much appreciated.
R J Grant on Nov 15, 2008
Very nicely done.

Grant
joystick7 on Nov 17, 2008
Beautiful!
Karen on Nov 17, 2008
Excellent!! I am proud of you Sis!
Catelin Hoover on Dec 30, 2008
Jackie

Very nice!
Jenny Heart on Jan 13, 2009
Your so right, it just takes one look. Nicely put!

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