Poetry of acceptance in life.

Very still

 

I saw your face

Rendering a picture perfect

Of spirit, zest and vigor

You are unduly, warm and happy

Bouncing joy of laughter

Dancing feet of madness

I want to be with your foolishness

Taking dip into a pool of rabidness

Nights of risk and unlawful happiness

Boundless and wild escapades

Dangerous and gamble on every ventures

 

As I sit here

Staring at your youthfulness

But now I have lost my usefulness

Amiss at every piece of my body

Assuage response of my being

Befall with so much swiftness

My being used to… blazon at every

Veins ….encompasses within me

Hands motionless and lull

Placid and tranquil legs

Should I be faltered with just looking at you?

Or should I just fetter myself with an old me……

 

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Comments (10)
  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jul 16, 2010

    A well written poem with some very good lines.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jul 16, 2010

    I think we have to accept the aging process though we can slow it down. A very creative piece.

    Christine

  • scheng1 on Jul 16, 2010

    Very sentimental.

  • giftarist on Jul 16, 2010

    Well expressed piece. Nice, kabayan.

  • Lord Banks on Jul 16, 2010

    Very good I liked that one, LB

  • Anj M on Jul 16, 2010

    Very well expressed :)

  • yes me on Jul 16, 2010

    like it cheers

  • Sushant94 on Jul 17, 2010

    wooo awesome :)

  • Tom Woodside on Jul 17, 2010

    another good write. thank you!

  • Joseph Scott on Aug 21, 2010

    Good poem, very expressive..

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