Victoria

Phoenix Montoya on Oct 11, 2011

October twelve.

As shadows begin to creep,

she prays for valor,

and hope not to weep ,

for to die, she must savor .

Remember Victoria?

Her love and her vow?

My own gloria,

the girl who was once your beau.

She aches to hear your voice,

Every night, she waits -

your heart, her sole choice.

Hence, to perish is her fate.

Do you remember her name?

Her enthusiasm?

Her spirit, her game?

Victoria, your phantasm.

Your lover, my dearest friend.

Guilt has been attained,

lies have come to end,

yet affection has remained.

Remember Victoria?

her madness, my feat.

All my gloria,

for my birth has been her death.

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Comments (15)

Sunjhini on Oct 11, 2011
ohh to touching… beautiful write
CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 11, 2011
Your words flew smoothly. well done!
mtrguanlao on Oct 11, 2011
I love the name Victoria!
Melody SJAL on Oct 11, 2011
I am mesmerized by your words.
yes me on Oct 11, 2011
Liked it very very much Phoenix… cheers
beingwell on Oct 12, 2011
How wonderful!
papaleng on Oct 13, 2011
heartfelt and I like the picture bez
FX777222999 on Oct 14, 2011
Victoria, a name to remember, just left some memories inside my heart.
beingwell on Oct 17, 2011
Oh! I’m back in this one friend!
SharifaMcFarlane on Oct 26, 2011
Very good piece.
Likha on Nov 2, 2011
I’m intrigued by this piece.. much more with a mystifying name such as Victoria. Good one as usual.
ittech on Nov 6, 2011
good one excellent
scheng1 on Nov 6, 2011
Nice, very romantic
FX777222999 on Nov 12, 2011
Revisiting this article.
ittech on Dec 14, 2011
She aches to hear your voice,

Every night, she waits -

beautyful

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