very touching poem, are you an Aussie too?

Yeah from NSW!!!!

Very Nice. I thought of the world trade center while reading it.

That’s very lovely!

Your diction is nice but I think that’s too sweet to describe about burning and fire. Just my opinion, anyway.

It’s lovely but not in a sweet way as Nev was saying. I like it.

A nice piece of work,but has to side with renita on this one.My mind went back to when the World trade Center was in flames and all those people perished.

I hate when it’s summer here because we get a lot of fires too.

I have family in the fire department, this strikes close to home, I love it

Wow, good momentum given the subject!

this is so sad. i always worry about everyone when i hear theres a huge fire.

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/On-That-September-Day.533325

Good Stuff Man!!! Im going to go check out the rest of your work. Hey remoteman213, tell me what you think of my poem Growth.

Amazingly deep! Keep writing, you’ve got talent.

Wow, nice job
I live in Melbourne so the subject is pretty depressing for me
Thankfully, I’m not too close to the fires, but I have friends that are and it is just so hard for them

Oh, man that bush fire often happen here as well. I hope nobody get hurt.

i haven’t read all of your work, but this one is very inspirational i like it

I really enjoyed that poem, a very good verse on something so sad.

Very nice!

yeh i saw this on the news, im in nsw…it was terrible

Is that an experience that happens in your country? Ah poetry that teaches. I like that!